It’s a new month, but I’m still working on the same story. It took me a while and a week with a cold to find the right voice for one of my main characters. Now that I figured out his personality, I’m having an easier time writing his story. One thing, though, he still sounds a lot younger than I want him to be. Oh, and I have changed his name three times.

I should be reaching the halfway point in this story today, and hopefully, have it ready for my editor by the end of the holiday weekend.

Jonah looked up when Madison traced his upper lip with his index finger, and couldn’t control the whimper that escaped him at the touch. Adrianne and Marshall laughed, but the intensity of Madison’s gaze had Jonah’s dick throbbing, and for a moment, he thought Madison knew. If not, the way his body shivered was all the evidence Madison would need.

“Come on, Princess. Let’s see what you can do for me.”

He grabbed his bag and followed Madison without looking back at their family, but not before mumbling, “Don’t call me Princess,” on his way out.


Rainbow SnippetsRainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers to gather once a week to share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation.



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